Malade12's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Tweenless Animation]

Hmm, sorry for my english knowledge..

But what's a tween? XD

Fawx responds:

in the author's comments

[jesus party]

Are you serious?

Great job, by the way! :) Love Jesus, I look like him... without the beard XD

Guy below me: You know, that's the point, Jesus wouldn't party, so let's make a flash about Jesus partying. At least you don't talk like a fanatic (you know, people saying "You dumbass you don't even know 'bout Jesus and it's a disgrace to the religion, God is almighty!") but seriously, take that to the second degree.

[Don't eat that Sandwich!!]

About the bad cartoon

Movie was awesome, yes the voice could be improved, but I think "funny" voice was what fitted in that movie, it's far from "these pancakes are tiny" so even if their "matter of fact" voice works well in THAT movie, it wouldn't have the same effect in yours (someone below me suggested that, so I just add my little personnal touch ;p)

And for the guy who said "this was like a bad cartoon. the jokes were like a bad cartoon how he flew through all the factories with inconvenient stuff but other than that you did an ok job for a story about a sandwich." well he's totally wrong: these cartoons are GREAT and you call them the Looney Tunes! That little allusion to them with the flying soda can was really nice ;)

Even if the voices were a bit annoying and the animation lacking of fluidity, the jokes were perfect: one thing: you don't see the bear's arm in the sandwich until he discovers it (I think so) but you clearly see the tiny spears in the fries, so even if it kinda follow some logic, it completely blew the punch for me about the spears.

[Prime Minister Address]

I didn't laugh

It lacked humour. The arts were nice, though... sorry, isn't really constructive, but it left me expressionless, it was boring.

[Panda Fight]

Pretty Short

Arts were okay, but not much effort was put in it... I thought it would be funnier, I was expecting something neater. Yeah, pandas are funny, so what? making them stabbing each other....
you know what, it reminds me of a fighting stickmen animation. They are good, but only if you do something original with it.... and the Pandas weren't enough to make it look real good.

4/5, because the idea was pretty silly, but poorly executed. Try longer movie, and with more visual jokes. That was free violence....

Oh! Almost forgot: although I didn't find any meanings or anything, the bloody hearts were really cool! Making the corpse fade away to realize that the blood stains are forming bleeding hearts, it's cute..... ok, I get your note up to 7 :)

[Pen License]

HOLLY SHIT!

"what is that?" "show me your pen license... pen license, show it to me"
YOU'RE GOIN' TO JAAAAAIL!
Man, it was so exagerated, yet so funny, and so... man it is perfect. Really funny, maybe you should have pushed the joke a little farther, but to make it short leave it funnier :)

[Emo Girl]

Prety Nice

Actually you draw pretty well, the animation was ok, still it lacks a punchline, a story, something. And there was that loop, I watched twice because I expected some kind of end XD

carolshki27 responds:

hehe..whew..sorry about the loop..im still learning :) there is a story behind this and its done..it just doesnt have a preloader etc etc..hehe

[Gears of Awesome]

Less awesome...

I don't know why, I didn't find it as funny as the other awesome movies :( There was something missing, like crazy voices, more joke.... this one felt empty, in some way, it disappointed me.

Hope you're going to do something that's more like the true Egoraptor :P (could you ever do such a great movie as Metal Gear Awesome? I'd love to see that, anyway :) )

[The Way The War Ends]

Nice movie

I think you're a bit to envolved in the political opinion, but it is nice to refer to it: I think only a message against war would do the job, but maybe it gives support to your idea.
Really touching movie, with a fitting song. I hope you'll be acclaimed, you made a nice work.

About what the guy said below me
The war's a waste since the beginning. USA government are "supporting" countries with their army only to appear bigger, for their image and of course, for the oil and all that shit(or whatever "petrole" is called in english.... gas for your car, you know?) They get into other people business and what's the result? people dying on both sides....
War is foolish, not him. Get back the american troops and what will happen? A lot less victim, probably, Americans are only provocating incident there.

I hope canadian troops will get back from afghanistan soon enough, too.
War is bad, and no one should argue about that.

[Crazy Jay's Revenge]

You could have submitted the whole collab..

I mean, it was short, and you gotta have a lot of stickman fight if you want it to be good (stickmen are a bit overdone,, you got to be really creative or it gets boring).